Hey everyone,
i hope you are all fairing well with your paper. I can't seem to stay focused for more than 5 minutes. I think I need to change this thesis statement, so if you have any ideas, hit me up.
"Grace Paley and Raymond Carver are able to create this human interaction in society with their words in these short stories, “Samuel”, and “Cathedral”, by establishing relationships through thoughts, actions, and emotion. "
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Hey Jennifer! I noticed that you are a non-traditional college student, so you have more on your mind and it's hard to focus. How about going to the campus or local library in your spare time, alone, and work on your paper? You'll have a quiet area surrounded by work, so you'll have no choice but to work! GOOD LUCK!
Hey Jennifer! I noticed that you are a non-traditional college student, so you have more on your mind and it's hard to focus. How about going to the campus or local library in your spare time, alone, and work on your paper? You'll have a quiet area surrounded by work, so you'll have no choice but to work! GOOD LUCK!
Hey,I think that you should maybe reword your thesis because when I read it, it sounds out of order....But Good Luck Girl!!!!!!
Wow I seem to have a lot of the same problems...I definitely have trouble staying focused! Um I have read your thesis many times ha ha and I think that maybe you could elaborate on what kind of human interaction. Its probably just me but I'm kind of lost when I read it but then again thats what your paper does as a whole is back it up. I would really like to read it when you get done.
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